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Nicole Lise Feingold's avatar

The line “a defeated army” stopped me in my tracks, and “an archaeologist of my own entropic life” will stay with me. Really beautiful!

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lara 🪭🎴🐦‍⬛🫕's avatar

this is so well written, i really appreciated this, thought i should let you know!

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Misty Hazel's avatar

'I’m too busy drowning to learn how to swim.' DAMNNN, that's such a great one 🛐

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v.vii's avatar

wow.. well put together my friend :)

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Mkwawa shujaa's avatar

The whole piece feels like a quiet, poetic rebellion against chaos. Loved it. I have a suggestion too. i just texted it inbox.

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Ecem Polat's avatar

Very honest and raw view of life. It felt like I was in your head through your words. Great writing!

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